This shot would have worked much better with less depth of field—maybe at f2.8, or if my lens permitted it, even lower. I think the windows on the bottom right are a bit distracting. I’m putting this up because I think, otherwise, this photo is strong. That face being positioned right in the middle is staring right at you.

Nikon D80 / Tamron 17-50mm f2.8 / iso100 f4 1/250sec 26mm